Oh Boy!

Some day when I am done
These grains of sand will speak
Of a boy who chased his destiny…
Today, let me just be

Some day when I am done
These waves will rush to greet
A man who took his chances…
Today, apprehensively they meet

Some day when I am done
The sky will paint a picturesque hue
Of dreams both shattered and made…
Today, they simply ask ‘Will you?’

Some day when I am done
My shadow shall fear not the sun
For I’ll fly away like the wind…
Today, however I am just one 

Some day when I am done
Pain shall trouble me no more
Like a melody I will flow…
Today, I knock on closed doors

Someday when I am done
I’ll cross over to the other side
To live forever in eternity…
Today, I await the change of tide

For I have yet to accomplish and tread
Things undone and paths unknown
When the sun rises again tomorrow…
The battle to survive is my own

Happy to write this with Blog Fest 2012. 
Today we had to weave a post around the above photo prompthosted by Daphne

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10 responses to “Oh Boy!”

  1. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thank you, I loved penning it.

  2. Journey of Life avatar

    Beautifully illustrated!

  3. JANU avatar

    Loved your penning.

  4. Corinne @ Everyday Gyaan avatar
    Corinne @ Everyday Gyaan

    The first poem I’ve read of yours and I’m not surprised that it’s beautiful!

  5. Ruchira avatar

    Beautifully written Vinita. Very very beautifully written !

  6. Aabha Midha avatar

    Lovely Vinita… full of HOpe 🙂

  7. mridulachitnis avatar

    Your words sound so easy and yet they imply profound things especially when you are in poetic mood. Thats the beauty of this one too.

  8. danneromero avatar

    absolutely beautiful. it is so interesting what a picture means to different people… great write!

  9. Jenn avatar

    This was just excellent. It is really up to us–to survive on our own-isn’t it??

    Great take on this prompt!

    Cheers, Jenn.

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