V vinifies VERSE

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When the wondrous word bells chime
I s’pose you’ve composed a rhyme
But wait, hold on, do you mind?
Poetry you write, but what kind?
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Is it a sonnet that works the lines?
Or a Haiku with seasonal signs?
Perhaps a limerick worth a laugh?
Or is it an insightful epitaph?
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No, No, No, don’t hold your head
Cacophony could render you dead
The irony won’t go missing there
A couplet could’ve saved the day.
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Allegory might’ve made twice the sense
I prefer a love ballad, in my defense
Enjabment straddles across the road
As your rhyme threatens to explode
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Alphabets are not the only ABCs
Get theย analogy, if you will, please
An ode could be a work of art
But a Senryu, not for the faint of heart
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I could go on with this charade
But I hate to rain on your parade
To be a poet, many have tried
For better or for verse, you decide
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PS: I am not a poet.ย 
I simply love to rhyme.ย 
It makes it so much easierย 
Though not worth a dime

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35 responses to “V vinifies VERSE”

  1. Suzy avatar
    Suzy

    I love poems – of any kind. Enjoyed yours too.

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      I love them too Suzy. I guess our schooling has a great deal to do with that.

  2. Meena avatar
    Meena

    me n poems jus don go together! I don hv the patience to apreciate them :-/

  3. Meena avatar
    Meena

    But for once – urs is a easy read. I dint hv to read each line teice ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Breathing a sigh of relief Meena ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. PhenoMenon avatar
    PhenoMenon

    U dont need “rhyme” or reason to be a poet ๐Ÿ™‚

    PhenoMenon
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    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Oh the reason I Can do without….not the rhyme ๐Ÿ˜›

  5. Corinne Rodrigues avatar
    Corinne Rodrigues

    A verse a poet makes?
    I’m surprised that’s all it takes!
    Until this moment I called them fakes.

    Sorry…I got caught so up in the rhythm of your post. I like the unsaid bits!

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Ah, thank god someone noticed. I was beginning to wonder that only I could read between the lines, lol.

  6. Ruchira avatar

    Absolutely Loved it !
    and btw I so love the smurfs ๐Ÿ˜›

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Me too Ruchira. I put Smurfs there intentionally. At least people will V for Visit ๐Ÿ˜›

  7. Afshan avatar

    That’s a cute one
    Smurfish like ruchira said ๐Ÿ˜‰ and I don’t know so many kinds of poems even if I write them

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Afshan, neither do I….hence gave a statutory warning ๐Ÿ˜›

  8. Shilpa Garg avatar

    That’s a good one! I understand these kind of poems pretty easily ๐Ÿ˜€

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      So do I Shilpa ๐Ÿ˜€

  9. Me avatar

    Cute one! I love simple ones like this, coz I could understand it in one read. ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      I am glad you did ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. G Angela avatar

    I marvel at the way you express yourself! nice poem

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Thanks Angela, that’s the only way I know how to be. Expressive ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. 1 Hundred Works avatar
    1 Hundred Works

    Piece of art! I wish in my dreams I could be so fluid with words ๐Ÿ™‚

    Akhil Kalsh. http://www.1hw.in

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Ah, a compliment from a worthy writer always makes me smile ๐Ÿ™‚

  12. Cynthia Rodrigues Manchekar avatar

    That was educational indeed. Thank you for introducing us to the different kinds of verse there are.
    By the way, vinify means to make wine.
    Not entirely unrelated, don’t you think? ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Cynthia, I discovered the word vinification last year or the year before, not too sure. And yes, this was written more with vinify in mind than the kinds of verses….lol.

  13. JANU avatar

    For better or for verse…was so caught up with your words. Nice.

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Gracias Janu ๐Ÿ™‚

  14. sharmila k avatar

    Who said you are not a poet ?!You have created magic with your rhyme-whyme ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Ah, these simple charms you call magic. Very well then. ๐Ÿ˜›

  15. Nandana avatar

    Loved it!
    And the expression on that Smurf ๐Ÿ˜€

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Added Smurf for extra brownie points. ๐Ÿ˜€

  16. Roshni AaMom avatar

    LOL!! I still liked you poem, even though you profess not to be a poet!

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      I am not. I just like the rhyme sing song pattern ๐Ÿ˜€

  17. Anonymous avatar
    Anonymous

    Brilliant ! Wish I was still teaching in a school ,I would have used it !!! Jacinta

    1. Blogwati Gee avatar

      Wow, coming from you, I feel this was real good AJ.

  18. Me avatar

    Super duper cutee!!

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