The Circle of Life

 

Something about brides….and weddings that gets me misty eyed.Β Another sonnet written for the same theme, thought I’d share the song that inspired the poem πŸ™‚

 

 

Tempestuously, her silver anklets tinkle

Her heartbeat, the ornate bangles, jingle

Mesmerizing eyes hold a million dreams

Emotions run like an inhibited stream

Quivering lips that part into a shy smile

A coy demeanor that spells docile

In a gorgeous braid, her thick long hair

Of fallen petals, the fragrance fills the air

A bedecked palanquin is where she sits

To a new future her past she submits

The bud that flowered in the father’s house

Must now scent the gardens of the spouse

Once a daughter, but now she is a wife

Tradition calls it the circle of life.

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22 responses to “The Circle of Life”

  1. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Well Ash, my first write up ever was a poem at the age of 10. So I think you can safely say that πŸ˜€

  2. Ash avatar

    so well written … you are a poet at heart! loved your post for the dove contest too πŸ™‚

  3. JANU avatar

    Too good for that age. Lovely.

  4. Richa Kholkute avatar

    Beautifully written! Loved the last four lines.

  5. Rachna avatar

    I loved the last two lines. You write poetry well too :).

  6. TTT avatar

    such b’ful lines ! loved it

  7. Aditi Pathak avatar

    I must admit; if a bride-to-be reads this poem, she’d end up with tears in her eyes. πŸ™‚

  8. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thanks Janu πŸ™‚

  9. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Richa they are my fav too πŸ™‚

  10. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Rachna, I do try πŸ™‚

  11. Blogwati Gee avatar

    TTT…glad you did

  12. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Aditi….awww…I think so too!

  13. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Shooting Star, thank you so much.

  14. Ghazala Hossain avatar

    I love this one too πŸ™‚

  15. vaisakhi avatar

    wows beutiful lines…perfct rhyme…i loved the usage of words…amazin…:)

  16. prateek mathur avatar

    u started off as a satirical/funny writer but u have made a quick transition to a poet…great work πŸ™‚

  17. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Ghazala you are just too biased πŸ˜›

  18. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thanks so much Vaisakhi…I love them too πŸ™‚

  19. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Prateek…actually started writing poems way back when I was 10……just found my way back to them πŸ™‚

  20. Richa Singh avatar

    Coy demeanor…. The words look to be so soft and yet wonderfully true πŸ™‚

    1. blogwatig avatar

      Thanks Richa…….brides are beautiful, no?

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