This post has been published as part of Blog Tag – You’re It
28 awesome bloggers from all over the world are participating in this and presenting their wishes under the banner “Sometimes I Wish…”
Thank you Suzy for that fabulous introduction and the Blog Tag baton. Hope to do this good!
My wishes really are all over the place…..and the one thing that I wish for…..the heavens won’t let it happen….
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Sometimes I wish I’d meet a handsome prince
Who’d whisk me away on his horse so white
My head goes Uh-oh as I stop to think
He surely would be stuck in traffic alrite
Sometimes I wish I’d find the perfect fit
Of a shoe that matches the glitz and glam
My head shakes in disapproval of my thoughts
Beauty in modern times is just such a sham
Sometimes I wish I’d be a reigning superstar
Thrive on adulation and live life queen-size
The head shudders and rings aloud warning bells
Between the journey and destination, be wise
Sometimes I wish I’d have everlasting happiness
No more tears that cause heart wrenching pain
The head then intervenes and gently smiles
Every rainbow must breakthrough from rain
Sometimes I wish you’d be right here
And I pray for a miracle each passing day
The tear clouds threaten to thunder
While the heart simply tugs and gives way
And now to introduce Brenda Morguez Granger who gives passion a pursuit. She writes with precision yet, the honesty will touch you. Words come easy to her, just as her thoughts fall into place. She promises to make your visit to her blog a memorable one.
Comments
Yup Susan, I chose rhyme coz that pretty much brings out the essence of life 🙂
Janu, the only one that I want can never happen……the heavens will have to fight the angel of death for that one…..
Thanks Privy…..yup that is pretty much the way I intended it 🙂
Yes Mary, dreams are all that I have 🙂
I wish for you too, but I also believe, that somewhere he knows what your wishing…
I like how every wish ends with a reality bite. Most wishes are so.
Loved the fantasy/reality juxtaposition here, V.
Joy always,
Susan
Beautiful…hope a couple of them come true. 🙂
Beautiful…loved the way it started as a fantasy, dream and then ended into a reality tugging your heart <3
I wish that your most wanted wish could come true for you…even if only in your dreams ♥♥♥
Absolutely beautiful poem about what you wish for. So lilting and lyrical!
Blessings!
wishing some of your wishes come true for you! thank you for joining the blog tag — i’m happy to meet you!
Lovely post BG. Wishes are plenty and never ending and it always hard to satisfy them as well.
Your point about beauty being a sham is quite true. Everything has become so fake nowadays.
Keep posting 🙂
Regards,
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
I so much enjoyed reading your wishes, may most of them come true.
No more tears, no more sorrow, no more pain…..heaven will fight the angel of death…heaven will win……Such a beautiful poem…your words are beautiful……it’s nice to connect with you through words …As always…XOXOXOXOXO
I love love love poems so this post just thrilled me. Absolutely wonderful and I hope at lease some of your wishes do come true.
I love love love poems so this post just thrilled me. Absolutely wonderful and I hope at lease some of your wishes do come true.
I could ‘feel’ your poem…and I wish the same things for myself. I do believe in miracles 🙂
It’s a pleasure meeting you Blogwati 🙂 Lots of love.
Oh what wonderful thoughts. I truly have often wished nearly all of them. Beautiful thoughts. Delightful post.
Corinne I know he does, visited me again last night 🙂
Thanks Martha, blessings is what we all really need…..
Dangerous Linda, love the name and yes happy to meet you too.
Thanks Jay for reading and posting a comment religiously. I really look forward to them 🙂
Thanks Luchi…..all except one really are creative liberties……
Bongo………….a huuuuuuuuggggggggggeeeeeeeeee grateful hug coming your way…….thank you so much…
I am so glad you liked this Suzy…..hope your dreams come true too!
Melissa, that is the bets compliment I could get for these words. If you have felt what I written, then I’ve got what I have secretly wished for 🙂
Thanks Kathy, hope your dreams come true too…
I know some of the wishes can’t come true, but I hope at least some will.
I love how you rhymed a wish with reality, a touch humor, filled will sad… very emotionally charged writing! Like what Mary said, as sad as it is, even if only in your dreams.
I love the way you have written this. A perfect presentation, dreams and reality. Prefect. thank you!
I read this poem aloud, and it flows well … very easy to perform. Congratulations.
As to the content … I thoroughly enjoyed your observations.
With respect, Pat.
Thanks so much Nikky 🙂
Thank you for understanding the emotions behind this rhyme Amy….it means much……..
Thanks Jan Neel, I am glad you think so…
With deep gratitude, Patricia. Thank you for dropping by.