Sometimes I wish………

This post has been published as part of Blog Tag – You’re It
28 awesome bloggers from all over the world are participating in this and presenting their wishes under the banner “Sometimes I Wish…”
Thank you Suzy for that fabulous introduction and the Blog Tag baton. Hope to do this good!
My wishes really are all over the place…..and the one thing that I wish for…..the heavens won’t let it happen….
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Sometimes I wish I’d meet a handsome prince
Who’d whisk me away on his horse so white
My head goes Uh-oh as I stop to think
He surely would be stuck in traffic alrite
Sometimes I wish I’d find the perfect fit
Of a shoe that matches the glitz and glam
My head shakes in disapproval of my thoughts
Beauty in modern times is just such a sham
Sometimes I wish I’d be a reigning superstar
Thrive on adulation and live life queen-size
The head shudders and rings aloud warning bells
Between the journey and destination, be wise
Sometimes I wish I’d have everlasting happiness
No more tears that cause heart wrenching pain
The head then intervenes and gently smiles
Every rainbow must breakthrough from rain
Sometimes I wish you’d be right here
And I pray for a miracle each passing day
The tear clouds threaten to thunder
While the heart simply tugs and gives way
And now to introduce Brenda Morguez Granger who gives passion a pursuit. She writes with precision yet, the honesty will touch you. Words come easy to her, just as her thoughts fall into place. She promises to make your visit to her blog a memorable one.

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35 responses to “Sometimes I wish………”

  1. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Yup Susan, I chose rhyme coz that pretty much brings out the essence of life 🙂

  2. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Janu, the only one that I want can never happen……the heavens will have to fight the angel of death for that one…..

  3. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thanks Privy…..yup that is pretty much the way I intended it 🙂

  4. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Yes Mary, dreams are all that I have 🙂

  5. Corinne @ Everyday Gyaan avatar
    Corinne @ Everyday Gyaan

    I wish for you too, but I also believe, that somewhere he knows what your wishing…

  6. Susan Deborah avatar

    I like how every wish ends with a reality bite. Most wishes are so.

    Loved the fantasy/reality juxtaposition here, V.

    Joy always,
    Susan

  7. JANU avatar

    Beautiful…hope a couple of them come true. 🙂

  8. Me avatar

    Beautiful…loved the way it started as a fantasy, dream and then ended into a reality tugging your heart <3

  9. Mary Hudak-Collins avatar

    I wish that your most wanted wish could come true for you…even if only in your dreams ♥♥♥

  10. Martha J. M. Orlando avatar

    Absolutely beautiful poem about what you wish for. So lilting and lyrical!
    Blessings!

  11. Dangerous Linda avatar

    wishing some of your wishes come true for you! thank you for joining the blog tag — i’m happy to meet you!

  12. Jay Singh avatar

    Lovely post BG. Wishes are plenty and never ending and it always hard to satisfy them as well.
    Your point about beauty being a sham is quite true. Everything has become so fake nowadays.
    Keep posting 🙂

    Regards,

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

  13. Luchi Smiles avatar
    Luchi Smiles

    I so much enjoyed reading your wishes, may most of them come true.

  14. Bongo avatar

    No more tears, no more sorrow, no more pain…..heaven will fight the angel of death…heaven will win……Such a beautiful poem…your words are beautiful……it’s nice to connect with you through words …As always…XOXOXOXOXO

  15. Suzy avatar
    Suzy

    I love love love poems so this post just thrilled me. Absolutely wonderful and I hope at lease some of your wishes do come true.

  16. Suzy avatar
    Suzy

    I love love love poems so this post just thrilled me. Absolutely wonderful and I hope at lease some of your wishes do come true.

  17. melissa avatar

    I could ‘feel’ your poem…and I wish the same things for myself. I do believe in miracles 🙂

    It’s a pleasure meeting you Blogwati 🙂 Lots of love.

  18. Kathy avatar
    Kathy

    Oh what wonderful thoughts. I truly have often wished nearly all of them. Beautiful thoughts. Delightful post.

  19. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Corinne I know he does, visited me again last night 🙂

  20. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thanks Martha, blessings is what we all really need…..

  21. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Dangerous Linda, love the name and yes happy to meet you too.

  22. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thanks Jay for reading and posting a comment religiously. I really look forward to them 🙂

  23. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thanks Luchi…..all except one really are creative liberties……

  24. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Bongo………….a huuuuuuuuggggggggggeeeeeeeeee grateful hug coming your way…….thank you so much…

  25. Blogwati Gee avatar

    I am so glad you liked this Suzy…..hope your dreams come true too!

  26. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Melissa, that is the bets compliment I could get for these words. If you have felt what I written, then I’ve got what I have secretly wished for 🙂

  27. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thanks Kathy, hope your dreams come true too…

  28. Nikky44 avatar

    I know some of the wishes can’t come true, but I hope at least some will.

  29. Amy @mommetime avatar

    I love how you rhymed a wish with reality, a touch humor, filled will sad… very emotionally charged writing! Like what Mary said, as sad as it is, even if only in your dreams.

  30. jan neel avatar

    I love the way you have written this. A perfect presentation, dreams and reality. Prefect. thank you!

  31. Patricia Eastwood avatar

    I read this poem aloud, and it flows well … very easy to perform. Congratulations.
    As to the content … I thoroughly enjoyed your observations.
    With respect, Pat.

  32. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thanks so much Nikky 🙂

  33. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thank you for understanding the emotions behind this rhyme Amy….it means much……..

  34. Blogwati Gee avatar

    Thanks Jan Neel, I am glad you think so…

  35. Blogwati Gee avatar

    With deep gratitude, Patricia. Thank you for dropping by.

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