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Sometimes I wish………
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35 responses to “Sometimes I wish………”
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Yup Susan, I chose rhyme coz that pretty much brings out the essence of life 🙂
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Janu, the only one that I want can never happen……the heavens will have to fight the angel of death for that one…..
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Thanks Privy…..yup that is pretty much the way I intended it 🙂
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Yes Mary, dreams are all that I have 🙂
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I wish for you too, but I also believe, that somewhere he knows what your wishing…
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I like how every wish ends with a reality bite. Most wishes are so.
Loved the fantasy/reality juxtaposition here, V.
Joy always,
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Beautiful…hope a couple of them come true. 🙂
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Beautiful…loved the way it started as a fantasy, dream and then ended into a reality tugging your heart <3
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I wish that your most wanted wish could come true for you…even if only in your dreams ♥♥♥
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Absolutely beautiful poem about what you wish for. So lilting and lyrical!
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wishing some of your wishes come true for you! thank you for joining the blog tag — i’m happy to meet you!
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Lovely post BG. Wishes are plenty and never ending and it always hard to satisfy them as well.
Your point about beauty being a sham is quite true. Everything has become so fake nowadays.
Keep posting 🙂Regards,
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I so much enjoyed reading your wishes, may most of them come true.
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No more tears, no more sorrow, no more pain…..heaven will fight the angel of death…heaven will win……Such a beautiful poem…your words are beautiful……it’s nice to connect with you through words …As always…XOXOXOXOXO
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I love love love poems so this post just thrilled me. Absolutely wonderful and I hope at lease some of your wishes do come true.
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I love love love poems so this post just thrilled me. Absolutely wonderful and I hope at lease some of your wishes do come true.
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I could ‘feel’ your poem…and I wish the same things for myself. I do believe in miracles 🙂
It’s a pleasure meeting you Blogwati 🙂 Lots of love.
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Oh what wonderful thoughts. I truly have often wished nearly all of them. Beautiful thoughts. Delightful post.
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Corinne I know he does, visited me again last night 🙂
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Thanks Martha, blessings is what we all really need…..
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Dangerous Linda, love the name and yes happy to meet you too.
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Thanks Jay for reading and posting a comment religiously. I really look forward to them 🙂
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Thanks Luchi…..all except one really are creative liberties……
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Bongo………….a huuuuuuuuggggggggggeeeeeeeeee grateful hug coming your way…….thank you so much…
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I am so glad you liked this Suzy…..hope your dreams come true too!
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Melissa, that is the bets compliment I could get for these words. If you have felt what I written, then I’ve got what I have secretly wished for 🙂
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Thanks Kathy, hope your dreams come true too…
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I know some of the wishes can’t come true, but I hope at least some will.
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I love how you rhymed a wish with reality, a touch humor, filled will sad… very emotionally charged writing! Like what Mary said, as sad as it is, even if only in your dreams.
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I love the way you have written this. A perfect presentation, dreams and reality. Prefect. thank you!
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I read this poem aloud, and it flows well … very easy to perform. Congratulations.
As to the content … I thoroughly enjoyed your observations.
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Thanks so much Nikky 🙂
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Thank you for understanding the emotions behind this rhyme Amy….it means much……..
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Thanks Jan Neel, I am glad you think so…
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With deep gratitude, Patricia. Thank you for dropping by.
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